terça-feira, 16 de abril de 2013

As The Snow Falls - Chapter One





Unrest

Death the Queen is speaking:
Hello! How  have you been? I hope that everything if fine with you! (:
Since I know that some foreigners (including some amazing friends of mine) read my stories, I decided to translate this one too. It's very different from 'Testing Love', because 'As The Snow Falls' is a horror story. I like to try writting different genres of stories, so I hope that you'll like this one.
I don't have many things to say, but I hope that you'll enjoy Elloise's adventure! Enjoy! <3 

[the image of the chapter will go here, when I finish to draw it]

It was a cold afternoon during the month of September, when a young lady was walking alone on a forest trail. She had teary eyes and her hair was all tangled and dirty. The lips seemed to be cracking due to the dryness, like if they’ve never tasted anything liquid before. And the clothes – I’m not sure if they could be considered clothes – were composed by a lot of old rags crawling across the ground like a dirty dress.
She was walking barefoot on the humid ground, only wandering, with no idea of where to go. She was carrying the pain of melancholic thoughts, but she had a blank expression in her face. Her arms were hurt and it looked like if someone had cut her in little pieces, but she didn’t seem to care.
Tired, she crouched with her hands pressed against her stomach, letting her forehead touch the cold ground. She started to cry again and many painful thoughts started to emerge. The funniest thing was that some of them weren’t even hers.
She could do nothing and the only thing that she was able to do in the next minute was to throw up a red smudge in the white scenery that was starting to appear.
It was snowing.


Near to the forest, there was a small town where only a few lived, since many of them wanted to change their lives moving to the big city. The majority of the population there is composed by farmers and once someone decides to live there for the rest of their lives, they know already that they shouldn’t have any big expectations in life.
The only connection they had with the big city was a road and they usually take four hours to get to the city.
The population was a little restless with the rumors that a family from the big city was moving to the town, in the middle of nowhere. They knew nothing about them, but some people said that the man was a very important entrepreneur and his family had a good status in the high society.
Elloise, the entrepreneur’s daughter, wasn’t very happy with the situation.

 – Why do we have to move to another city? I bet that they don’t even know what internet is!

 – Calm down, Elloise. I can’t do anything, it’s because your father’s work. We already talked about it.

 – But why him? There are so many other people that they could send!

 – His boss decided it, he had to accept it.

 – Well, and what about ME?

 – Darling, the world does not turns around you.

Her mother gave her a severe look and left the room without saying anything.
Elloise threw herself on the couch and sighed.
Her family was foreign. They arrived in that country with nothing, and when she finally thought it was everything okay, it happens.

– Damn it! – She threw one of the couch cushions against the wall, still trying to accept the idea.

 – Have you packed your belongings already? – Her mother yelled.

 – No…

 – What are you waiting for?

– Ugh... – She rolled her eyes.



~ End of the chapter ~

6 comentários:

  1. Dear Haru
    I like it :) It's very interesting what will happen next ^^
    Thank you for the chapter <3
    Your fan, Ell :D

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    1. Dear Ell,
      I'm glad to know that you liked, but as I told you, not many things happen in this chapter nor in the second one, but it'll change soon. (:
      Thank you so much for reading this chapter and for leaving a comment, my dear fan! <3
      Kisses and hugs! :D

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  2. Dear Dani,
    Finally I found the time to read your blog :) You have nice style of writing. I like snow~ I will be waiting for next part in English ^_^ I'd like to read the rest of your story.
    Your friend - Wera <3

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    1. Dear Wera,
      Thank you very much for finding some time to read my stories. Also, thank you for the compliment, I wasn't very sure if everything was alright with this English version! I'm way more confident when writting on my native language, haha!
      I like snow too, it's so nice! ♥
      As soon as I post the next part, I'll let you know, I promise! ^_^
      Your friend,

      Dani :D

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  3. Dear Dani,
    Finally I found the time to read your blog~ You have nice style of writing ^_^ I like snow~ I will be waiting for next part in English. I'd like to read the rest of your story :)
    Your friend - Wera <3

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    1. Dear Wera,
      Thank you very much for finding some time to read my stories. Also, thank you for the compliment, I wasn't very sure if everything was alright with this English version! I'm way more confident when writting on my native language, haha!
      I like snow too, it's so nice! ♥
      As soon as I post the next part, I'll let you know, I promise! ^_^
      Your friend,

      Dani :D

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